So i made her head a little fatter since it was too narrow, and gave her some spooky dead looking eyes.... and last but not least... i copied Jeremy's soft drop shadow :-p. Oh this is the smooth 1 iteration of the cleaned up mesh.
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I think she's looking pretty good! A lot of progress, the ears especially, I know how much of a pain in the ass those are.
Now for my famous critiques :)
1. I would make the cranium rounder, it looks very oval and small in the back, as if the back shrunk.
2. The neck. Where the neck meets the ear there is a muscle there.. it's called the... Sternocleidomastoid (how could I have forgotten!). That muscle almost bulges a tiny bit on women, especially when they strain their neck. More commonly though, the neck looks smooth as it connects to the bottom of the ear, not indented. As this muscle comes down it almost makes it to the center of the chest where the clavicles meet.
3.Maybe push the ears in a bit, they look like they're maybe a 1/4 of an inch out to far. And the ears (from the profile view) should be closer to the center of the skull just below and to the right of where the horizontal and vertical center lines would meet if they were drawn on the head.
4. The eyes could use just a bit more detail, the sockets seem a little puffy. (Maybe I need to check out your reference..)
I'll leave it at that. I like the progress, she's coming along like a girl in porn. Good shyte man! Glad to see the updates. I meant to comment earlier but I was in a heated debate about the layout of the lips with Altruiz1ne. Anyways.. lates.
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